Otherwise, take into account just how to assess teacher. Thus, there is more variety of opinions.
The disadvantages can be found, for example, the "friends", ie, evaluate the person who has exhibited work as good or bad you fall, with very little purpose. Anyway I think that this problem is not present because we normally consider to be assessed to the person for their work and not for what it is my friend.
Moreover, this way of evaluating peers think we can discuss with us to reach an agreement as assessed by groups, and this can be an advantage in giving the opinion of each and get different ideas.
Hello Ana!
ResponderEliminarI think that it's a great article with a good explanation of the activity, telling the advantages and disadvantages, which is something very important. But I've found some mistakes that will make your writing better.
Well, I don't understand some parts of the article, due to the prepositions you have put, but don't worry about it, because the colocation of prepositions is one of the most difficult things of English language. So revise them!
Then, in the third paragraph you have written "we normally consider to be assessed to the person..." and I think it's more correct to put "... to give assessed..." but I can be wrong.
To conclude, I have to tell you that you don't show very well your point of view about the activity.
I'm sure you can do it better, so go on, and thanks for writing all these articles!
Hi Ana! I have read your opinion about our methol of evaluation and I have found a mistake in your grammar, for example when you say ''has its advantages...'' the subject is before the verb, like ''it has advantages...''
ResponderEliminarI also wanted to ask you what is the meaning of ''ie'' and ''thus''. In my opinion if you used easier words, the text would be understood better.
Well, I think your English is very good and your opinion about this methol is very interesting!
Kisses,
Laura :)
Hi! thanks for your opinion! the meaning of "ie" is " es decir" and the meaning of "thus" is "por lo tanto"
Eliminar;)
The error I have found that in the second row in front of you has not put any subject and the other places you don't put subject, but otherwise I think it's fine.
ResponderEliminarHi Ana!! I leave this comment in your blog because I want tell you some of your mistakes and so, yo can improve your post. In the first place, the expression ''has its advantages and disadvantages'' not is correct, it have to be ''it has advantages and disadvantages''.
ResponderEliminarAlso, when you say , ''take into account just how to assess teacher'', the correctly form is '' it take into account just how the teacher assess''. You have to remember that you must put the subject before the verb.
Finally, here, ''evaluate the person who has exhibited work as good or bad you fall, with very little purpose'' the subject of the sentence is the verb ''evaluate'', but when a verb is the subjects like in this case, yo must put ''evaluating''. I hope that I can help you.
Anyway, I think that you have a good English and also, yo give a lot of reasons.
Hello Ana,
ResponderEliminaras the rest said, you have some mistakes in your text, but it's ok the rest. I like your opinion about this method and the text is really good.
I don't undestand some words like "ie" or "thus", but I think that this is a mistake that you made when you were writting.
Well done.
Hi Isa! Laura asks me the meaning of this words too!
Eliminarfirst, "ie" means " es decir" and "thus" means "por lo tanto" but I put it abbreviated!
kisses sugu